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30 A Final Relfection
When recalling this semester the one thing that continues to haunt me is the nearly ancient bug list. This assignment drove me nuts. It was...
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My entrepreneurship story comes from the job that I have had for the last four years. I work at a county recreation center in which I am a ... -
How to Fail at Almost Everything and Still Win Big By Scott Adams 1) The Theme of this book is that you can face a lot of failure in life...
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The first economic opportunity I found is equal pay for men and women with the same job title. Of course there are many factors such as exp...
Nice work Ryan. Personally, I think you have a solid idea. I felt your pitch was good, although, you may have extended it a bit longer than needed. Keep up the good work.
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ReplyDeleteLastly, you did a good job on listing the benefactors of your idea. It was clear that the benefit is three prong and well thought out. Again, nice work Ryan.
I am a huge fan of the idea and I like how you named the three benefactors and showed how the idea can benefit each one of them. You had good volume and eye contact throughout the video. The only thing I would recommend is to cut out some of the superfluous stuff and trim it down about 10-15 seconds.
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan, I though you did a great job. You were moving around, had an enthusiastic voice and new what you were saying. It seemed to come off as fluid. You explained well what the unmet need is and how you will fix it. Next time however I would shorten the duration of the pitch. Other than that i though it was very good.
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