Please excuse the heavy breathing. I have no problem going up a stair case, but when it takes ten tries it starts to catch up.
The most useful feedback so far is the overall interest in a program like this. With my personality the realization of creating something to help others makes me want it that much more. A lot of the feedback I got from last video was that i was a little redundant as well as my video was too long. For this pitch I tried to shorten this one up as well as get to the point.
Ryan - I have enjoyed your elevator pitch and, as I told before, I think your idea is really good. I personally think that the only thing you may have to improve is to keep the camera fixed, I mean, not moving it, because at least in my case, I get a bit tired of the (although slight) constant movement of the camera. But apart from that detail, pretty good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan that was a good pitch and I liked the beginning motivation. Your idea is great and as I stated before I wish someone would have thought of this earlier on. Your were very clear and to the point also you shortened it up which made it easier to follow. Keep up the great work man.
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan, i really like the idea behind the stairs. I thought you were very easy to understand and thought the length was good. A few things to fix for next video would be to position the camera higher up, more directly at your face rather than at your chest. As well as have more enthusiasm. Other than that, really like the idea and pitch, good job.
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